Brainstorming Idea; Graf#5
If there is one thing in life that I have learned, things work better using structure. And I hold on to advice as much as I hold on to the pennies in my penny jar. Someday, they will all be worth something. I like the list of items or subjects and I believe that it helps promote ideas when you see it in front of you. Or I also see it as a thinking tool. The more that your brain thinks about something, it almost makes you think of other things that they are related with. It seems that it keeps a constant thought, bouncing down a chart. The only thing that I could say that I may have a hard time with,is wanting to combine all of the items or subjects in my essay. I would be afraid that it would be too much and become too elaborate to keep the reader interested. Kind of like dressing up and wearing all huge gaudy fake rhinestones on your shirt or for jewelry. It's nice and shiny, but too much and people start to look away. Not to offend anyone because I love shiny things, too! Maybe that is my problem, as to why I elaborate? So, I think trailing your ideas is very useful. Now I hope I can prove to myself on the essay. Thank you for the sample.
"The more that your brain thinks about something, it almost makes you think of other things that they are related with."
ReplyDeleteThat is definitely a key part of essay-writing, that and avoiding too many rhinestones!